求汉译英请大神帮忙看看译文有什么语法错误或需要增加或删减的地方,着重在于修改译文语法和语句错误就好!WindWill,1986年出生于中国重庆,从3岁开始正式接触音乐,WindWill就跟随音乐不断感

求汉译英请大神帮忙看看译文有什么语法错误或需要增加或删减的地方,着重在于修改译文语法和语句错误就好!WindWill,1986年出生于中国重庆,从3岁开始正式接触音乐,WindWill就跟随音乐不断感
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请大神帮忙看看译文有什么语法错误或需要增加或删减的地方,着重在于修改译文语法和语句错误就好!
WindWill,1986年出生于中国重庆,从3岁开始正式接触音乐,WindWill就跟随音乐不断感受和探究人的内心与精神,他认为任何音乐形式 对于整个世界而言都是举足轻重的存在,每一种都是对人类深度感受的表达
WindWill的音乐历程从中国民乐开始,经历了流行、独立、摇滚、金属、新世纪等几乎所有曲风后,WindWill对音乐的认识与 理解以及接受能力有了全新的提高.就电子音乐上来说,从新世纪开始接触到电子乐元素,感受Enigma、Koan、Schiller等电子音乐 人和音乐团体的作品给了WindWill更多的视角和启发,而在chillout上,WindWill第一次接触是源于cafe del mar.
WindWill的set思路及他对各个曲目的理解能力来源于其他曲风的启发,他努力让自己的set能够表达出曲目的灵魂和展现出它 们相互的对话,他希望自己的set带有生命力,能打动听者的内心,让听众与他一起跟随源于心灵的音乐的召唤.
WindWill,born in Chongqing in 1986.Where he started to touch the elements of electronic music is New Age.Listening to the music which produced by the artists such as Enigma、Koan、Schiller gives him much perspective and inspiration.A few years later,WindWill began to explore Chillout though "Cafe Del Mar".
The inspiration of WindWill's set also comes from many other music styles,He tries his best to express the soul from his set and shows us the connecting between each track,He wishes that his set can has enough vitality to move our heart.
可以自行删减需要翻译的中文原文，使句式更好翻译更通顺，截止今天晚上23：00，

求汉译英请大神帮忙看看译文有什么语法错误或需要增加或删减的地方,着重在于修改译文语法和语句错误就好!WindWill,1986年出生于中国重庆,从3岁开始正式接触音乐,WindWill就跟随音乐不断感
WindWill,born in Chongqing in 1986.He got to know music at the age of 3.Getting along with music allows him to feel and probe into people's heart and mind.In his opinion,any form of music is a unyielding existence to the world.Every piece is an expression of people's feelings.
WindWill's music journey starts from Chinese Folk music.After facing styles such as Modern,Rock,Metal,Independent and New Age Music,he had a higher level of understanding towards music.
Interacting with Electronic Music starting from New Age,not only the pieces produced by artists such as Enigma,Koan and Schiller but also the electrical elements gives him much perspective and inspiration.A few years later,WindWill began to explore Chillout after go though "Cafe Del Mar".(不好意思,前面这句不是太明白……)
The innovation of WindWill's set comes from many other music styles too.He tries his best to express the soul from his music piece and shows us the connection between each tracks.He wishes his music is highly spirit,to move our heart and go along with him in the fountain of soul music.

•Going green seems to be a fad(时尚) for a lot of people these days.Whether that is good or bad,we can’t really say, but for the two of us, going green is not a fad but a life style.
On April...

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•Going green seems to be a fad(时尚) for a lot of people these days.Whether that is good or bad,we can’t really say, but for the two of us, going green is not a fad but a life style.
On April 22,2011,we decided to be green every single day for an entire year. This meant doing 365 different things, and it also meant challenging ourselves to go green beyond the easy things. Rather than recycle and reduce our energy, we had to think of 365 diffenent things to do and this was no easy task.
如今，绿色环保对一些人来说是一种时尚，这是好是坏很难说，但是对于我们两个来说，绿色环保不是时尚，是生活方式。在2011年4月22日，我们决定在全年的每一天都要过绿色生活。这意味着365天做不一样的环保事情，同时也意味着要求我们去做那些简单事情之外的环保活动。除了循环使用和减少能耗之外，我们必须想出另外365件环保事情，这不是个简单的工作。
With the idea of going green every single day a year,Our Greean Year started. My wife and I decided to educate people about how they could go green in their lives and hoped we could show people all green things that could be done to help the environment. We wanted to push the message that every little bit helps.
随着每天都做不一样的环保活动决定的开始，我们绿色环保年开始。我妻子和我决定教人们怎么绿色生活并且期望通过向人们展示那些可以绿色环保的活动来帮助我们的环境。我们想把所有的即使是对环境的帮助很少的信息传递出去。
Over the course of Our Green Year, we completely changed our lifestyles. We now shop at organic(有机的) stores. We consume less meat,choosing green food. We have greatly reduced our buying we don’t need. We have given away half of what we owned through websites.Our home is kept clean by vinegar and lemon juice, with no chemical cleaners. We make our own butter, enjoying the smell of home-made fresh bread. In our home office anyone caught doing something ungreen might be punished.
Our minds have been changed by Our Green Year. We are grateful for the chance to have been able to go green and educate others. We believe that we do have the power to change things and help our pla
在这一个绿色环保年的过程中，我们完全改变了我们的生活方式。我们现在咱有机商店购物。我们很少吃肉，选择绿色食品。我们很大程度上点掉了那些我们不需要的采购。我们通过网站分发出去一半我们自己的东西。我们家用醋和柠檬汁来清扫，化学清洁剂。我们自己做黄油，享受自制面包的新鲜香味。在我们的家庭办公室，任何人做不环保的事情都会被处罚。
我们的观念在绿色环保年中得到转变。对于能有机会过环保生活和教其他人过环保生活，我们心存感激。我们相信我们有能力去改变事情和帮助
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