proof reading 一行一错.至少有一处正确 前两行已找出After I finished school this year ,I bagan to look for work.Now several months later,I stillhaven't found the job I'm interested.Last Sundaymorning I received a phone callfrom a man c

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proof reading 一行一错.至少有一处正确 前两行已找出After I finished school this year ,I bagan to look for work.Now several months later,I stillhaven't found the job I'm interested.Last Sundaymorning I received a phone callfrom a man c

proof reading 一行一错.至少有一处正确 前两行已找出After I finished school this year ,I bagan to look for work.Now several months later,I stillhaven't found the job I'm interested.Last Sundaymorning I received a phone callfrom a man c
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一行一错.至少有一处正确 前两行已找出
After I finished school this year ,I bagan
to look for work.Now several months later,I still
haven't found the job I'm interested.Last Sunday
morning I received a phone callfrom a man calling
him Mr Smith.He said to me on the phone,"I hear you do
very well in your studies.I may have a job for you,"
I entered his office with a beaten heart.How I hoped
that I will go through the job hunting talk today and he
would take me on as a lab assistant.And to my surprises,
what he said disappoting.He only needed a model.

proof reading 一行一错.至少有一处正确 前两行已找出After I finished school this year ,I bagan to look for work.Now several months later,I stillhaven't found the job I'm interested.Last Sundaymorning I received a phone callfrom a man c
3.interested后加in
4.calling改成called
5去掉him
7.entered后加into
8.will改成would
9,surprises 改成surpise
10.said后加was