帮我检查下英语书信错误第一次真正给朋友用英语写信咯,没这个自信直接寄,所以先请英语地道的高手帮忙检查下错误咯,ORZDear LuHow are you doing?I hope you are well!Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recoverred f

帮我检查下英语书信错误第一次真正给朋友用英语写信咯,没这个自信直接寄,所以先请英语地道的高手帮忙检查下错误咯,ORZDear LuHow are you doing?I hope you are well!Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recoverred f
帮我检查下英语书信错误
第一次真正给朋友用英语写信咯,没这个自信直接寄,所以先请英语地道的高手帮忙检查下错误咯,ORZ
Dear Lu
How are you doing?I hope you are well!
Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recoverred from the bad cold.But what a bad cold I've ever had.My body temperature has reached nearly 39 degrees and with an awful cough as well.All those symptoms last nearly two weeks,however,it's amazing during the time I didn't feel too bad.I guess,may be I'm determined-minded.Spring is a season that always easy to make people weak.So please take care.
This tern live,I think,is not easy.I have much more classes than before.There are just 3 empty classes in a weekday,in the meantime,I have to go to the Communist Party Sparetime Classes at weekends.Also,the hard time always makes me feel depressed and tied.Otherwise may be it's still not even half as hard as senior 3 yet.So I can understand your busy life.I always agree with what people say senior 3 is the hardest the time in one's life.Consequently you shoud not only attend your study but care more about your health and diet.But it's easier said than done,so please try your best to blance them.Your healthy condition can makes your study smooth and also makes me happy.
I've just passed CET-4 but now I'm seeking further.I'm going to take part in CET-6.I know CET-6 is more and more difficult than CET-4.But there is an old saying"there is no royal road to learing."May be I have no other road to chose.Besides,I hope you can make a wonderful wish for me!
I know you've just finished PETS-2 listening test.I'm expecting your good news.
The marathon race is going to sprint,the finish line is at the sight.I'm fully convincing that finally you can make it.Because you are the best runner!
Best wishes
yours sincerely
Elly

帮我检查下英语书信错误第一次真正给朋友用英语写信咯,没这个自信直接寄,所以先请英语地道的高手帮忙检查下错误咯,ORZDear LuHow are you doing?I hope you are well!Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recoverred f
Dear Lu
How are you doing?I hope you are well!
Uh huh!I'm pleased to say that I have recoverred from the bad cold.What a bad cold I've ever had!My body temperature has reached nearly 39 degrees with an awful cough.All of those symptoms last almost two weeks,however,it's amazing during the time I didn't feel too bad.I suppose that perhaps I'm determined-minded.Spring is a season which would always make people to be weak easily.Thus please take care.
Life in this term,I think,is not easy.I have much more classes than before.There are just 3 empty classes in a weekday,in the meantime,I have to go to the Communist Party Sparetime Classes at weekends.Also,the hard time always makes me feel depressed and exausted.Otherwise may be it's still not even half as hard as senior 3 yet.Hence I am able to understand how busy your life would be.I always agree with what people say that senior 3 is the hardest time in one's life.Consequently you should not only attend your study but care more about your health,including a healthy diet all the time.But it's easier to say than to do,therefore just try your best to blance them.Good health condition can ensure your study to be smooth,which will make me happy as well.
I've just passed CET-4 but now I'm seeking further.I'm going to participate in CET-6.I know CET-6 is so much more difficult than CET-4.But there is an old saying"there is no royal road to learing."May be I have no other way to choose.Besides,hopely you might wish to make a wonderful wish for me!
I know you've just finished PETS-2 listening test.I'm expecting your good news.
The marathon race is going to sprint,the finish line is at the sight.I'm fully convincing that finally you can make it.Because you are the best runner!
With best wishes
Elly
以上是我帮你修改过以后的信件,有了best wish 还放yours sincerely可以说是画蛇添足.这两个属于同一类语言,只放一个就够了.通篇还不错,但词藻之间连接略显生硬,显然缺乏语感.

This tern live 应改为 This term live
I'm fully convincing that 应改为 I'm fully convinced that
至于其他的嘛，讲得还通顺吧
祝你学习有所进步

what are you doing，

Dear Lu
How are you doing?I hope you are well!
Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recovered from the bad cold. My body temperature has reached to nearly 39 C degree with awful cough .All these s...

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Dear Lu
How are you doing?I hope you are well!
Uh huh!I'm happy to say I have recovered from the bad cold. My body temperature has reached to nearly 39 C degree with awful cough .All these symptoms last nearly two weeks,however,it's strange that I didn't feel too bad during that time.I guess I'm qute strong-minded.Spring is a season when people are more likely to get sick.So please take care.
I don’t think the new semester will be an easy one. I have much more classes than before. There are only three blanks on the school timetable in a week, what’s more,I have to go to the Communist Party in my spare time or on weekends. Also,the hard time always makes me feel depressed and tired. The senior year may be even harder. So I can understand your busy life.I always agree when people say senior year is the hardest time in one's college life. Because you not only have to attend your study but also care more about your health and diet.But it's easier said than done,so please try your best to make both ends meet.Your health condition can make your study smoothly and also make me happy.
I've just passed CET-4 (college English test-level 4), and I want to do better.I'm going to take part in CET-6.I know CET-6 is more difficult than CET-4.But there is an old saying"there is no royal road to learing."May be I don’t have other choice.Besides,I hope you would like to pray for me!
I know you've just finished PETS-2 listening test.I'm expecting the good news.
The marathon race is going to sprint,the finish line is at sight.I'm fully convinced that finally you can make it.Because you are the best runner!
Best wishes
Yours sincerely
Elly
随便改了下。你已经写得很完整了，不好改，不然就没有你自己的风格了。放心，他绝对看得懂。

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Dear Lu
How are you doing? I know you should be OK
Uh huh! I’m happy to say I have recovered from the bad cold, which was the worst cold I’ve suffered. My body temperature has reached nearly...

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Dear Lu
How are you doing? I know you should be OK
Uh huh! I’m happy to say I have recovered from the bad cold, which was the worst cold I’ve suffered. My body temperature has reached nearly 39 degrees and with an awful cough as well. All those symptoms last nearly two weeks, quiet amazing, I didn't feel too bad during that time. Guess what; maybe I'm determined-minded. As you probably know, it is easy to feel weak during the spring, so please take care.
I don’t think this term is easy, due to I’ve got much more classes than previous term. There are just 3 available classes in weekdays, in the meantime, I have to go to the Communist Party Spare time Classes at weekends. I always feel depressed and tired during the harder time. Probably it's still much easier than senior 3; I can understand your busy life. I always agree with what people say senior 3 is the hardest the time in one's life. Consequently you should not only attend your study but care more about your health and diet. It's easier to say than to do, so please try your best to balance them. A good healthy condition can make your study smoothly as well as make me happy.
I’m seeking further since I’ve passed CET-4, and my next plan is to take part in CET6, you probably should known that CET-6 is much more difficult than CET-4, however there is an old saying “there is no royal road to learning." It is quiet difficult for me to choose other road. I hope you can make a wonderful wish for me, by the way!
I know you've just finished PETS-2 listening test, I’m expecting the good news from you.
The marathon race is going to sprint; the finish line is at the sight. I’m fully convincing that finally you can make it. Trust me, you are the best runner!
Regards
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