改错 Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irriTraveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground train

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改错 Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irriTraveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground train

改错 Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irriTraveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground train
改错 Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irri
Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground trains for as long as half an hour sometimes.

改错 Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irriTraveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,for there is no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground train
traveling to work by car 对应对比的应该也用动名词形式,to use public transport 该改成:using public transport

Traveling to work by car is more convenient than to use public transport ,
for there is(being) no irritation caused by waiting for buses or underground trains for as long as half an hour sometimes.

1.transport 是动词(V.)吧?在这里应该用它的名词(N.)形式:transportation!
2.因为主句为比较级,所以后边应该也是比较级,把“no‘’ 改成''less''比较合适!
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for-as/becuase
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