Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and close the door.next first class.Mis li called me for answer the question,but I didnot know the question.so teacher punished me to cleaned t

Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and close the door.next first class.Mis li called me for answer the question,but I didnot know the question.so teacher punished me to cleaned t
Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and close the door.next first class.Mis li called me for answer the question,but I didnot know the question.so teacher punished me to cleaned the classroom.I felt this was a trouble day.

Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and close the door.next first class.Mis li called me for answer the question,but I didnot know the question.so teacher punished me to cleaned t
“next first class”“next”的“n”大写；“ Mis li ”写错了,应该是“Miss”；把”then“改为"but"；"colse"改为“closed”【过去式】；“called me for answer”改为“asked me to answer”；“know the question.”你应该是想说不知道问题的答案吧?把“quesion”改为“answer”；我认为把“ punished me to ”改为“let me to ”更好一些.还有,“felt”改为”fell“；再把“trouble”改为“terrible”更恰当呢~
所以文章变成这样：
Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.but I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and closed the door.first class.Miss li asked me to answer the question,but I didnot know the answer.so teacher let me to cleaned the classroom.I felt this was a terrible day.
建议而已,不是很好……

第一个把home前面的to去掉，因为home是副词
第二个，next的n要大写，即Next
第三个，把cleane改为clean，因为to后面接动词不定式

yesterday,it was sunny,I went to school.but I forgot to take the key .I went back home again .I took
my key and closed the door .the first class, Miss Li called me to answer the question .but I didn't know the answer. so the teacher punished me to clean the classroom . I felt it was a unlucky day .

Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school. Then I forgot to take key. I came back home angin. I took my key and closed the door. Next first class. Miss li called me to answer a question,but I didnot know the answer. So teacher punished me to clean the classroom. I felt this was a trouble day.