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One person is still a person .but two people are a team.A
team can do everything that seems impossible .To succeed in life .We must iearn the spirit of cooperation .
First of all .We can catch happiness,relatians and friendship if we pull together .Cooperation makes people set aside their differences and work together .Second .as the famous proverb goes ,“Many hands make light work”.The power of only one person is very small ,but the power of lots people is strong enough to overcome any difficutly .Thild.It is easier to be suceessful.Good cooperation can make us work faster and better.
As we can see the the above,how necessery to be cooperation!As a saying goes ,One tree can not make a forest ,one flower can not make a spring But the most important means showing love for others It is love that turns the earth
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everything - a lot of things
seems impossible - seem impossible for just one person
learn - grasp
catch - catpure/seize
realtians - relationships
pull together - stick together
second - second of all
small - limited
lots people - lots of people
thild - last but not least
It is easier to be suceessful - It is easier to succeed when people are working together
see the the above - see from above
,how necessery to be cooperation - how necessary cooperation is
But the most important means showing love for others It is love that turns the earth - The most important part of cooperation is to show love for others as love is what turns the earth.

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One person is still a person .but two people are a team.A
team can do everything that seems impossible .To succeed in life .We must iearn （learn）the spirit of cooperation .
First ...

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有些小毛病：
One person is still a person .but two people are a team.A
team can do everything that seems impossible .To succeed in life .We must iearn （learn）the spirit of cooperation .
First of all .We can catch happiness，relatians（relationship） and friendship if we pull together .Cooperation makes people set aside their differences and work together .Second（Secondly） .as the famous proverb goes ，“Many hands make light work”.The power of only one person is very small ，but the power of lots （加of）people is strong enough to overcome any difficutly（difficulty） .Thild（Thirdly）.（，）It is easier to be suceessful（successful）.Good cooperation can make us work faster and better.
As we can see （加from） the above，how（it's） necessery to be（可删去） cooperation（cooperate）！As a saying goes ，One tree can not make a forest ，one flower can not make a spring But the most important means showing love for others。 It is love that turns the earth 。
写得很不错，主要是单词拼写问题，平时多写写外语作文请老师和同学修改，好处多多！

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基本都是小问题,稍微注意下标点符号的用法,尤其是在写作当中,这是一个不能忽视的问题,养成一个正确书写习惯很重要哦。
One person is still a person .but two people are a team.这是一个句子,peson后面的句号要改为逗号
A team can do everything that seems impossible .此句语法正...

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基本都是小问题,稍微注意下标点符号的用法,尤其是在写作当中,这是一个不能忽视的问题,养成一个正确书写习惯很重要哦。
One person is still a person .but two people are a team.这是一个句子,peson后面的句号要改为逗号
A team can do everything that seems impossible .此句语法正确
To succeed in life . We must iearn the spirit of cooperation . 这个句子中,life 后面的句号要改成逗号,主语we中的w要小写
First of all .We can catch happiness，relatians and friendship if we pull together .此句子中有几个标点符号不正确,还有就是relatian这个词好象是个错误单词,但这里只改语法错误,至于措辞方面就不乱改了,正确的句子为:First of all, we can catch happiness, relatians and friendship if we pull together.
Cooperation makes people set aside their differences and work together .此句语法正确
Second .as the famous proverb goes ，“Many hands make light work”.这里Second后面的标点符号用逗号
The power of only one person is very small ，but the power of lots people is strong enough to overcome any difficutly .语法正确
Thild.It is easier to be suceessful.Good cooperation can make us work faster and better. 这里Thild应为Third,后面的标点符号用逗号,It 改为小写it
As we can see the the above，how necessery to be cooperation！这里cooperation 改为cooperative
As a saying goes ，One tree can not make a forest ，one flower can not make a spring But the most important means showing love for others It is love that turns the earth 这里有几个地方没有标点符号,spring后面要加句号,others后面要加句号

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