小弟刚完成了一篇personal statement,望大神帮我改下语法错误~I have always been fascinated with computers,especially on games.With the development of computers,there are more functions for people’s daily life,such as weather forecas

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小弟刚完成了一篇personal statement,望大神帮我改下语法错误~I have always been fascinated with computers,especially on games.With the development of computers,there are more functions for people’s daily life,such as weather forecas

小弟刚完成了一篇personal statement,望大神帮我改下语法错误~I have always been fascinated with computers,especially on games.With the development of computers,there are more functions for people’s daily life,such as weather forecas
小弟刚完成了一篇personal statement,望大神帮我改下语法错误~
I have always been fascinated with computers,especially on games.With the development of computers,there are more functions for people’s daily life,such as weather forecast and satellite,also ,computer has became an integral part of my life and turn into an infinite source of fascination for me,so computer science is the only course that fits me.Most of the knowledge of computer science is related to the development of games,such as Artificial Intelligence,software engineering and modeling.My dreamed career is to enter a famous game company ,which would require knowledge from computer science.That is the reason why I am keen on to improving my knowledge and skill in the field of games.

小弟刚完成了一篇personal statement,望大神帮我改下语法错误~I have always been fascinated with computers,especially on games.With the development of computers,there are more functions for people’s daily life,such as weather forecas
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